Dark Poetry #1 |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Heart pumping vile liquid. Black crimson cascades through the veins. Filling every artery with darkness. Giving life to the most sadistic beings. Animating the purest evil. Giving life to the human race. ------------------ life is short kill quick [This message has been edited by suicidal dreams (edited 10-18-1999).] [This message has been edited by suicidal dreams (edited 10-18-1999).] |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Interesting...not sure I quite understand though.... ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
How about "Black?" DB ------------------ And in the darkest depths of Mordor, I met a girl so fair But Gollum and the Evil One Crept up and slipped away with her. ===Zep=== |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Animated Evil would be good. I like it ![]() Jenny ![]() ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Amy this poem is about Humans and how we are the most evil beings on this earth, for various and obvious reasons btw people thanks for the help ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Human blood or Sadistic Blood maybe. Liked this one a lot SD ![]() ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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