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wolfie97
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA

0 posted 1999-10-18 05:15 PM



CAUTIOUS TEARS

Iam here again
without a clue
an angel I send
My whole heart to.

Don't let me slip
Back into
My lonley dip
You ask who.

I am lost
To you
At what cost
Bill due

You try
Now
Then I
Bow

Maybe.

Baby.

we.

see.

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Garrett 'sneaky' Gall

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Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
1 posted 1999-11-06 03:56 PM


I like the style, W.

No one should drop off unread.

DB


JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-11-06 08:55 PM


I like cautious tears alot!!

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-08 07:49 AM


Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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