Dark Poetry #1 |
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The ghost |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I cant forget the time in your eyes the time we kissed the time we said goodbye Even if it was just seconds or minutes at the most the memory is now like an unwanted ghost A ghost that still loves you a ghost that still cares even if you cant see it the ghost is always there waiting in the shadows hoping to be found the ghost is my heart that you've stomped to the ground [This message has been edited by starboards (edited 10-21-1999).] |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
This as if it came from my own soul!!! Welcome! Jenny ![]() |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
So sad! Well done verse. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very well done, Love the theme.... ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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Midniteyez Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 20Soldotna, Alaska USA |
Too true. Very well done |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
Very beautiful....and heartfelt. Your words seem to be a reflection of my feelings and pain also. My heart gooes out to yours. ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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