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A wish

Deverone
Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA

0 posted 1999-10-14 12:43 PM

Wish I had a gun
then I could have some fun.
Not a word to say
blow my troubles away.
Nothing but pain in the mind
no answers that I can find.
I want to lay down and die
there would be no tear in my eye.
This would be the easy way
to just disappear today.
Life is what I don't get
man, am I sick of it.

Things would be so much fun
if only.... I had a gun.

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Deverone

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-10-14 01:08 AM

A wish I too have often made. I hung in there, and now I have the will power to live...I won't roll over like a maimed dog and let life kick my in the stomach. If life kicks you...kick it right back

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Deverone
Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA

2 posted 1999-10-14 02:30 AM

Thanks SYSTEM, Took me a little while to relaize that I was able to kick back. I am here today though.

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Deverone

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-14 09:51 AM

Very troubled thoughts.I've had these same thoughts,but I'd be damned if I'd let them win.Don't just kick....stomp!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

4 posted 1999-10-14 09:56 AM

I agree with all who have commented here!
Good verse tho!!

Jenny

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 1999-10-19 06:40 PM

Deep thoughts...shared by many.
You have captured this well.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?

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