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LeeAnne Dk Junior Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 32 |
Don't say that you want me If you have someone else in mind Don't say that you have got to have me If you can't love me till the end of time Don't say that you love me If you plan to let me go Don't say that you are true If lies are all that you show Don't say that you'll always be with me If you aren't sure Don't say that you'll be there for me If the love you show isn't pure Don't express your feelings If they aren't there at all Don't say that you will cheer me on If your intention is to have me fall Don't ask me to be your girlfriend If you want to have me removed Don't say that you will always be there If you can't tell the truth |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this...reminded me of the song...Honey don't, say you will if you won't, oh no, honey don't. James |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Don't write poems in passion If you don't have any of it.... Add this too... Sincerely A_L |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Don't write poems in passion If you don't have any of it.... Add this too... Sincerely A_L |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
LeeAnne Another good poem from you here. Tragic in a way, uncertainty and fear of being foole always is in a relationship... But I´ll promise you this: Chances have to be taken if real love is to be given a chance. The bad part is that you have to fall to rise again and reach for higher mountains of love... -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi " Dont write poems in Passion If you don't have any of it " Add this line too.. Wonderful read..Don't be a hypocrite and thats all it takes.. Sincerely A_L |
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LeeAnne Dk Junior Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 32 |
Jmlee12345...Thank you, this just came off my mind A_L...I won't be. I will try to keep my passion alive. Its just that after so many falls...I do want someone to help me up. Thank you for commenting. Nando...Thank you for your comment. I have taken too many chances already. I just want somebody to be true. Someone who will tell you something and really mean it. Yes, you might say that I have been the fool. Well, its once bitten, twice shy. A cliche but it sure describes what I'm feeling. But no, I have not lost my faith in love. Like I said in my Poem Love....it goes on.I'll give Love chances...I always have. [This message has been edited by LeeAnne Dk (edited 06-10-2000).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
LeeAnne this is a great poem maybe this is what i need to give to my love i really love this poem what u said for him not to do is what my ex-girl actually did to me it is hard thanks for sharing this poem, it's really beautiful and meaningful |
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