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Necro Draconis
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since 2000-05-19
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0 posted 2000-06-09 08:31 PM



What a Feeling

Your hearts pounding
You begin to sweat
You feel you mind go blank
You begin to imagine things
That aren’t there
You look around and realize
That everyone is starring at you
You can’t move
Your strapped to the chair
You notice a figure coming
Straight for you
It has something
in it’s hands
it raises it’s hands
above its head
you try one last time to move
you can’t
It swings the object
toward your head
just as it  is going to hit
your alarm clock goes off
and you go about your day



 Let nature guide your soul.

Follow the path that nature gives.

© Copyright 2000 Ryan Kruse - All Rights Reserved
X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
1 posted 2000-06-09 11:10 PM


accck!
I'm not so sure I liked the storyline of this too well!
Creative concept tho....I have odd dreams near waking too that leave me all weird feeling when I wake!

~H

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