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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 2000-06-07 12:15 PM


I wish they would sing again
but instead they only sigh
My wing has been broken
and in the mirror I feel her scream
Just let me fly away from here
Falling and falling
....falling again
How many times will I fall into the dirt,
the rain dry upon my soul
The tears are lost amongst the thorns
never before had the wind blown this loud
and never before had I felt a blade
resting on my skin waiting to strike
Watch it flow....
watch it end...
the quest lost...
and death my friend.



 Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't.

~*Angel of Darkness*~



© Copyright 2000 Morgana - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-06-07 12:19 PM


Watch how graphic you get hon this is borderline, but all the same wonderful imagery and work here..  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Ember
Junior Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 10

2 posted 2000-06-07 12:21 PM


"mymomcallsmesatan: hrmm i wanna **** some stuff out and have some one say "Thats nice.. really great work here... keep it up"'

These are the words of a great man that we called Paul.

RIP Paul... 1984-2000

You have earned them

Love,
Ember

lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
3 posted 2000-06-07 03:44 AM


desperation pure. love it!

 Uta Lotharingia
"Wir wollen nicht Wert und Sinn ... wir wollen Unwert und Unsinn"
Raoul Hausmann

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
4 posted 2000-06-07 09:19 AM


Thank you all very, very much for your replies. I'll try and keep the graphics down Isis.   All my love and best wishes.

Yours truly,
Angel


 Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't.

~*Angel of Darkness*~



Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
5 posted 2000-06-12 03:12 AM


I try never to look into a mirror, afraid of what I might say to my self.
God I like this one of your's kid.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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...in my boxers...
6 posted 2002-03-20 03:31 AM


"I wish they would sing again
but instead they only sigh"

I can see your desire in these lines... they aptly tell the tale.

My wing has been broken
and in the mirror I feel her scream

I'm curious... who screams her? And... who broke your wing? Did the above yearning spell it out for me? Or merely show the beginning of it all...

Just let me fly away from here
Falling and falling
....falling again.

Love the repitition.  

How many times will I fall into the dirt,

We all ask this question throughout life, don't we?

the rain dry upon my soul



The tears are lost amongst the thorns.

Woah... powerful [edit] here girl. Who are your thorns here? Who has too many tears of there own to dry those that roll down your face?

never before had the wind blown this loud
and never before had I felt a blade
resting on my skin waiting to strike
Watch it flow....
watch it end...
the quest lost...
and death my friend.

The ending... made me wanna Simply mindblowing... or am I saying it blew me away. Not the words... but how aptly you painted the picture. Damn.

A splendid write, my memina.

Sincerely,
Mon verite


My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity.

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (03-20-2002 03:32 AM).]

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