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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I wish they would sing again but instead they only sigh My wing has been broken and in the mirror I feel her scream Just let me fly away from here Falling and falling ....falling again How many times will I fall into the dirt, the rain dry upon my soul The tears are lost amongst the thorns never before had the wind blown this loud and never before had I felt a blade resting on my skin waiting to strike Watch it flow.... watch it end... the quest lost... and death my friend. Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Watch how graphic you get hon this is borderline, but all the same wonderful imagery and work here..  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Ember Junior Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 10 |
"mymomcallsmesatan: hrmm i wanna **** some stuff out and have some one say "Thats nice.. really great work here... keep it up"' These are the words of a great man that we called Paul. RIP Paul... 1984-2000 You have earned them Love, Ember |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
desperation pure. love it! Uta Lotharingia "Wir wollen nicht Wert und Sinn ... wir wollen Unwert und Unsinn" Raoul Hausmann |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you all very, very much for your replies. I'll try and keep the graphics down Isis. All my love and best wishes.Yours truly, Angel Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I try never to look into a mirror, afraid of what I might say to my self. God I like this one of your's kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
"I wish they would sing again but instead they only sigh" I can see your desire in these lines... they aptly tell the tale. My wing has been broken and in the mirror I feel her scream I'm curious... who screams her? And... who broke your wing? Did the above yearning spell it out for me? Or merely show the beginning of it all... Just let me fly away from here Falling and falling ....falling again. Love the repitition. How many times will I fall into the dirt, We all ask this question throughout life, don't we? the rain dry upon my soul  The tears are lost amongst the thorns. Woah... powerful [edit] here girl. Who are your thorns here? Who has too many tears of there own to dry those that roll down your face?never before had the wind blown this loud and never before had I felt a blade resting on my skin waiting to strike Watch it flow.... watch it end... the quest lost... and death my friend. The ending... made me wanna  Simply mindblowing... or am I saying it blew me away. Not the words... but how aptly you painted the picture. Damn.A splendid write, my memina.  Sincerely, Mon verite My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity. [This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (03-20-2002 03:32 AM).] |
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