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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Laser beams Cut time into two every way in parts split dimensions one way same but different all back all forward all same bend space on a whim on to past on to all futures and self hold power dark skies night blazing nova hot and large in a day in ad finitum all one all every and all hearts alone nights melting rockets fly flash bang all ends "Prophet!" said I, "thing of evil!- prophet still, if bird or devil!- Whether Tempter sent, or whether tempest tossed thee here ashore, Desolate yet all undaunted, on this desert land enchanted- On this home by horror haunted- tell me truly, I implore- Is there- is there balm in Gilead?- tell me- tell me, I implore!" Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool walter... i like the way your presented this one... and the way it picks up speed and builds up to the end. great writing take care, jm |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
A great down hill slid kid. haha. I'm also a laser engraver so this hit home. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Very good poem! I like the way you presented the text. It seems to sort of convey duress. |
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