Dark Poetry #1 |
My little hound |
bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
On your morning drive as you passed by and you ran my little hound down into the ground Did it ever cross your mind whose hearts you had just ripped out. Could you hear my screams as I ran to the seen where you had done the damage with your machine Could you feel my knees buckle when I found my little hound ran down Was satan riding with you this early morning you didnt push your horn and give him a fair warn and make no mistake you didnt hit your brakes on this horrible morn On your way to your day could you feel my dismay could you hear my heart wail did you feel the tears that burned my eyes as I tried not to cry throughout my day You weren't there to hold me up as my husband watched my heart be crushed You can't imagine what you have taken away He was my little man he made my world alright he only gave delight and you tool him away without any dismay Manslaughter I say You didn't see me weep when he was buried deep My heart is screaming my soul is wailing and you didnt hear a sound when you ran him into the ground my poor little hound. This is for my little man Corky who I loved so much.He was hit this morning. And can no longer be with me. |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Hello, I am so sorry. Good poem though. But I do know how you feel I lost mine when I was 7 for the same reason although I have a cat now so a may not entirely understand. -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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traveling heart Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 26 |
I am so sorry for your loss. Losing a dog is such an incredible sadness... I think they are the most childlike of all creatures that are domesticated and I know when my parents cat was killed on a hit and run it was a horrible thing. My heart is with you today... People are idiots sometimes! |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
I DON'T UNDERSTAND THE KIND OF PERSON THAT WOULD DO THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Shoot,i turn back everytime i see a TURTLE crossing the road!! What is wrong with these people that think they don't have time to watch where they are going!!!!!!! grrrr!!!! This poem made me ANGRY!!!!! And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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