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Lindsay Kaznowski
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since 2000-05-27
Posts 23


0 posted 2000-05-28 03:07 PM


               ...Unreal Hate...

It Hunts you down, and hurt's you...

When you least expect its there.

It lurts around dark places...

And feeds on your true fear.
  
It wants you to feel the pain it felt...

And will do anything to get at you.

Thats what you should really fear...

The things it makes us humans do.

                -Princess

© Copyright 2000 Lindsay Kaznowski - All Rights Reserved
Lonelypoet
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA
1 posted 2000-05-28 05:03 PM


Good poem and it lurks around here alot. Hope to see more.
mario22
Junior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 23

2 posted 2000-05-28 05:13 PM


~~Lindsay~~
  Hey just wanted to say I loved the poem cute and innocent, ,heheh.  well just keep up the good work its all worth it.
always Mario22

brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
3 posted 2000-05-28 05:21 PM


Hatred hurts the person who feels it as much as the people it is directed at. It is like a cancer. I had a few "enemies" when I was young, people who liked to bully me, and sometimes I fought back and felt hatred but in the end it offered little comfort.
well I am starting to rant now great poem.


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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Do not listen to a word I say
Just listen to what I can keep silent"

Nicky Wire


Lindsay Kaznowski
Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 23

4 posted 2000-05-28 06:17 PM


~Everyone~
Thank you kindly--I love when people share their feelings about my poems...This in particular. Its about the feelings in life--about how people create their worst enemies. Well thanx again--hope to see you all around!

-Princess

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-05-28 10:51 PM


Lindsay,  Like Brian above I believe hating kills the hater inch by inch.  No matter what anyone has done to me in my life I try not to hate them.  It only hurts you in the end, karma eventually has her way.
Great work  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Lindsay Kaznowski
Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 23

6 posted 2000-05-28 11:35 PM


~Isis~
Your thoughts towards my poem are true, thank you kindly for sharing them with me  

-Princess

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
7 posted 2000-05-29 03:55 AM


hate is a big word kid. I had to let a bunch go, and it's hard to do that.
a very short and to the point poem. kid.


Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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