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Lindsay Kaznowski Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 23 |
I guess... I never realized this monster deep within... I guess thats how I made my sin... These words of mine mean nothing at all... I guess thats why he did not call... He broke my heart, and did it slow... I guess thats why he's my worst foe... These people today, must fight and bay... I guess thats why we must all pay... So now when you look round and round... Do you hear that same blue sound... -I guess thats the difference between you and me- -Princess |
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mario22 Junior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 23 |
Lindsey, GREAT yet another masterpiece, thanks for the kind words about my poem, hope to see more just like this one of yours in the future. always Mario22 |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
This one is showing great pain. very heartfelt kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
That difference is what seperates us from people like that. . . Excellent poem. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Lindsay, Very moving, deep. I liked it a lot. Your words do count, keep 'em coming. Marcy |
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Lindsay Kaznowski Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 23 |
~Everyone~ Thanx so much, for your kind words and gentle thoughts about my poem--And yes Sven, this is what seperates us from people like that--those "speacial" people. We all have them somewhere inside us, but only a person with a good heart can find that strong being within. Alle'cram--I'm glad that my words reach add least one heart  Joel, I guess the truth sometimes can be sad...-Princess |
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