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Lindsay Kaznowski
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since 2000-05-27
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0 posted 2000-05-28 02:22 PM


                   I guess...              

       I never realized this monster deep within...
       I guess thats how I made my sin...

These words of mine mean nothing at all...
I guess thats why he did not call...

       He broke my heart, and did it slow...
       I guess thats why he's my worst foe...

These people today, must fight and bay...
I guess thats why we must all pay...

       So now when you look round and round...
       Do you hear that same blue sound...
-I guess thats the difference between you and me-

                     -Princess


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mario22
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1 posted 2000-05-28 02:48 PM


Lindsey,
  GREAT yet another masterpiece, thanks for the kind words about my poem, hope to see more just like this one of yours in the future.
always Mario22

Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
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2 posted 2000-05-29 02:45 AM


This one is showing great pain.
very heartfelt kid.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Sven
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3 posted 2000-05-29 04:28 PM


That difference is what seperates us from people like that. . .

Excellent poem. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
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4 posted 2000-05-30 05:50 AM


Lindsay,  
  Very moving, deep. I liked it a lot. Your
words do count, keep 'em coming. Marcy

Lindsay Kaznowski
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since 2000-05-27
Posts 23

5 posted 2000-05-30 05:21 PM


~Everyone~
Thanx so much, for your kind words and gentle thoughts about my poem--And yes Sven, this is what seperates us from people like that--those "speacial" people. We all have them somewhere inside us, but only a person with a good heart can find that strong being within. Alle'cram--I'm glad that my words reach add least one heart   Joel, I guess the truth sometimes can be sad...

-Princess

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