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Dark Poetry #1

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mazzystar
Junior Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 13

0 posted 2000-05-26 04:30 PM

Lonely angels forever forgotten,
Their wings hanging limply behind them,
Collecting dust upon the ends from being dragged along the ground
Beneath their tattered gowns.
They wander about not knowing day from night
For in their minds they shall see merely darkness everlastingly.
If only they hadn't succumbed to such a drowing depth of sorrow
In their quest for a mythical ecstasy,
They might not have been blind in seeing
That a truly pure and eternal happiness had existed.
Now never to be found.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-05-26 06:41 PM

As you are new here you obviously don't know the rules. We all try to post no more than two poems in the one forum in a 24 hour time span, after all it is only fair.
Welcome to passions hope you enjoy your time here. And I'm going to close the threads to all but two of these poems.
Isis
Dark Forum Moderator

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Swåmp¤Faerÿie
Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 358
Illinois

2 posted 2000-05-26 09:15 PM

I thought this was a GREAT poem!! I especialy liked the way you describe the wings dragging in the dust,the tattered gowns,mythical ecstasy.......those are great verses!!!!! Looking forward to more.......just not all at once ;P

swampfaeryie

And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

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