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Virgo
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since 2000-03-27
Posts 46
tx

0 posted 2000-05-25 11:44 AM



I don't mean to hurt you
Those are not my intentions
But this much I can say is true
In my heart you made an indention

I know we are confused
For this I don't know why
I thought our love was true
That it was written in the sky

For all the wrong reasons
This relationship was begun
Unlike the seasons
We no longer blend as one

If it is purely physical...
An exciting unity it has been
Although it is truly unusual...
That it was not forseen

Could we have been so blinded
By the passions that we felt?
Or was it just destiny
For the cards that we were delt

No matter what transpires
I hope that you understand
That the only thing that matters
Is the love we feel at hand...


 

© Copyright 2000 Erica Y. Abarca - All Rights Reserved
Night Chica
Junior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 39
Vermont
1 posted 2000-05-25 05:10 PM


Once again, there are powerful feelings behind your words.  I was once in this doubting stage.  Sometimes you find that it was just a stage and then you go on with your love as strong as ever.  I learned from that to never give up faith in your partner.

Have faith in your relationship, hon.  It helps set the mind at ease.

Another wonderful poem.  

~* Megs *~


 I was never one to patiently pick up broken fragments and glue them together again and tell myself that the mended whole was as good as new. What is broken is broken- and I'd rather remember it as it was at its best than mend it and see the broken places as long as I lived.

-- Margaret Mitchell

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-05-26 02:17 AM


Yes as my friend said there are different stages, and all things change.
very good. I like this one.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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