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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-05-24 12:02 PM


In your reality I am nothing,
Merely a boil on the butt of humanity,
I am stupid and worthless,
Lousy at everything, always a calamity.

There is always something to condemn,
How you like to make me feel inferior,
You see only little nothings,
Not my gleaming interior.

I possess a soul sweet and true,
Only wanting what is best for me and mine,
You don't respect me and my ways,
Only darkness you bring today.

Others love a heart so true,
Others respect what I say, think and do,
I hardly ever think you do,
Never nice comments from you.

Always belittling everything I do,
No one is as perfect as you,
But if that is true,
Why are there two hearts torn and askew?

Will you not rest, until you have taken the last of my pride?
Will you always be this way,
Critising and accusing me,
Every night and day?

I still remember who you are,
That will never be forgotten,
It's sad to see,
A soul so twisted and rotten.

And what I see is MY constant reality.......

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 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)




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Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2000-05-24 12:41 PM


My friend, I am sorry to read this poem by you. . . it has no place coming from your heart. . . for you are indeed none of these things. . .

You are a wonderful person with much to offer. . . and let no one ever tell you differently!!!

Great poem. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-05-24 02:02 AM


No boils here kid.
No you are none of these things.
Someone that try's to make others small is indeed themselves small minded, they ride upon the emotional reign of others.
love you kid.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-05-24 07:07 AM


I definately respect you Isis...you have so much love and concern to offer to everyone.
This person that seems to think their purpose in this life is to criticize and demean you could use some lessons in respect and appreciation.
James

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-05-24 07:17 PM


Thanks Guys!!  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
5 posted 2000-05-25 08:52 AM


Isis...I keep coming back to read this but I am lost for words as to a reply. Certainly this has touched me, NOBODY is worthless, EVER!

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



Night Chica
Junior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 39
Vermont
6 posted 2000-05-25 05:21 PM


Isis, I have to agree with Eagle, NO one is worthless, especially you.  From what I know of you, you are a kind hearted and caring person.  You always find the good in every poem you come across.  Someone who cannot find the good in your soul, certainly is a twisted and rotten person.

Hang in there, and never let him get the best of you.

~* Megs *~

 I was never one to patiently pick up broken fragments and glue them together again and tell myself that the mended whole was as good as new. What is broken is broken- and I'd rather remember it as it was at its best than mend it and see the broken places as long as I lived.

-- Margaret Mitchell

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 2000-05-25 06:30 PM


Thanks Eagle One and Megan I won't!!!  I at least know my worth    As do my friends here in the dark forum.  Thanks  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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