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jnodell New Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 1 |
I once was loved by a special person. Then I found out he loved another. Heart broken I am. The world as I know it is crumbling at my feet, yet not a soul seems to care. No one believes what I have to say even though it is the truth and it hurts me inside. Life? What is so special about it? What is life when everyone is against you and you are the innocent? Cries for help go unanswered. Feelings are hurt while others stand by and laugh. Then the victim vanishes into the distance. |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Hey- life is special in so many ways there are too many to count. I'm sure you'll find a way to live on. I know you've heard this a million times...but this time it's coming from someone who has lived on...in more ways than one... bye Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Life is special so dont give up when you hit bottom theres nowhere to go but up.... |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
AWESOME POEM!!! its different and unique I like!!! but like all the others have said...you can only go up from here...think of this as a learning experience...and i know this sounds easy to say but i hope you can bring ur self to think like this...good luck and keep posting!! ashley "Falling in love is just that - falling. Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe. Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees. But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die." |
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