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jnodell
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since 2000-05-17
Posts 1


0 posted 2000-05-17 07:51 PM


I once was loved by
a special person.
Then I found out he loved another.
Heart broken I am.

The world as I know it
is crumbling at my feet,
yet not a soul seems to care.

No one believes
what I have to say
even though it is the truth
and it hurts me inside.

Life?
What is so special about it?
What is life when everyone
is against you
and you are the innocent?

Cries for help go unanswered.
Feelings are hurt
while others stand by and laugh.
Then the victim vanishes
into the distance.


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Bronx
Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
1 posted 2000-05-17 08:37 PM


Hey-
life is special in so many ways there are too many to count.  I'm sure you'll find a way to live on.  I know you've heard this a million times...but this time it's coming from someone who has lived on...in more ways than one...
bye
Bronx


 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!


bluebrdy65
Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
2 posted 2000-05-17 10:10 PM


Life is special so dont give up
when you hit bottom theres nowhere
to go but up....

starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
3 posted 2000-05-17 11:02 PM


AWESOME POEM!!! its different and unique I like!!! but like all the others have said...you can only go up from here...think of this as a learning experience...and i know this sounds easy to say but i hope you can bring ur self to think like this...good luck and keep posting!!

ashley

 "Falling in love is just that - falling.
Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe.
Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees.
But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die."

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