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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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Downward Spiral Spirit sinks as dark clouds fill the skies of the mind An emptiness growing devouring all within Leaving one cold and alone While thoughts rattle chaotically Like long dead leaves blown by the wind © 5/14/00 Gary Pence |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Jonas, Awesome poem. Loved the descriptions, especialy this one... "Like long dead leaves blown by the wind" Joy |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Jonas I too loved the imagery/descriptions in this, like the long dead lives, blown by the wind, I feel like those leaves myself sometimes. Wonderful work hon  At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen.... It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart.... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Wonderful description here, you have painted a great imagery on emptiness. with chaotic thoughts. A great poem here. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you friends. Sometimes the best way to beat a depression is to write it out of my system. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow Jonas,...well written expression. Yes writing helps for me as well....Keep it up ,...you're good. |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thanks Spitfire! |
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