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sheba57 Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 64vincennes, in usa |
darkness i thought i was blind, darkness all round. or that i had stumbled into a cavern. panic sets in - heart begins racing breathing jerkily eyes opening wide to let in the light, but there is none. i begin to run - screaming into that blackness. no sense of direction, of belonging - total chaos. my mind gone ballistic, all hope evaporated. terrified of the void, yet drawn into it's very core. stumbling - arms outstretched - reaching for anything. all the while screaming - but only in my head. i fall to my knees - face in my hands. more fearful than i've ever been. then, i feel a breath upon my cheek - caressing my hair. looking up and catching the brilliant blanket of jewels, there all along as it settles softly upon me. ~celtic rose - 2000~ ghost ranch - abiquiu, new mexico |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wonderful imagery here hon, pulls you in.. Good work  At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen.... It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart.... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
How well I know this caveren of darkness. and the running and screaming. Joel. |
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sheba57 Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 64vincennes, in usa |
this one came from deep within. it was written while i was at a very special place in new mex. the darkness and silence really got to me the first night i was there, and this came from how freaked i was by it all. thanks again for the kind words. sheba |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
I too have felt the same way. It's kinda scary but at the same time mystical  |
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