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Involuntary Manslaughter

honey007luv
New Member

since 2000-05-09

Posts 7

0 posted 2000-05-13 02:02 AM

INVOLUNTARY MANSLAUGHTER

IF I TAKE MY LIFE, WOULD IT BE SUICIDE, IS IT MY FAULT THEY DIDN'T HEAR MY CRY?

IF THEY FIND ME LAYING IN A POOL OF BLOOD, IS IT MY FAULT I DIDN'T FEEL THEIR LOVE.

IF I GO INSANE, IS IT MY FAULT THEY TOUGHT IT WAS ALL A GAME.  DON'T BE SURPRISED WHEN YOU HEAR THE GUN GO BANG BANG!!!

WHEN YOU FEEL YOUR FAMILY TURN AGAINST YOU AND HAVE NO ONE ELSE TO TURN TO, YOU FEEL THEY'RE BETTER OFF WITHOUT YOU AND ALL THIS SEEMS REALLY TRUE, WHO'S TO BLAME?

IT'S A SHAME!

WILL THEY ADMIT IT OR SAY THEY HAD NOTHING TO DO WITH IT.  WAS IT REALLY SOMETHING THAT WAS ABLE TO BE STOPED OR WERE THEY JUST WAITHIN TO HEAR THE GUN GO POP POP!?!

...ALL IS QUIET, THE JUDGE POUNDED THE GAVEL AND IT WAS SAID  "IT WASN'T SUICIDE,"  I STARTED TO HEAR THE LAUGHTER WHEN THE JUDGE YELLED, "...INVOLUNTARY MANSLAUGHTER!"

[This message has been edited by honey007luv (edited 05-13-2000).]

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-13 02:09 PM

~Yowzers,...this is a powerful piece here. Nice work,..welcome to the darkside of Passions...you'll fit in juuust fine.

isiskate81
Junior Member

since 2000-04-14

Posts 31

2 posted 2000-05-13 05:17 PM

This was a great post and it was very emotional. I kind of know how you feel. I know its not a good feeling. Welcome to passions in poetry.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-05-14 09:35 PM

Strong emotions and powerful imagery here. Unfortuneatly this is a little too graphic for Passions tastes. I will close this topic.Please read the email I sent you.

At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen....
It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

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