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Trynete
Junior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 35
Cape Cod, MA

0 posted 2000-05-11 05:43 PM


Cape Cod Sunsets (Not as pretty as they seem)

I'm in a hole,
It seems the harder I try to dig my way out,
the hole just gets deeper and deeper.
The place is on fire and I can't
seem to find an exit,
to get out.
All I can do is just scream and shout.
Everyday my life feel ike a soap opera,
scene after dramatic scene.
My life feels like an endless dream.
Or is this what they call a nightmare?
No one ver said life was fair.
And seems that no on here
truly cares.
The only thing in my life
worth looking at are
these Cape Cod sunsets,
and everyday I wish I was
pregnant.
I always heard that
was a sign of neglect.
Every I feel the urge to cry,
but everytime I try,
I can't because I've been
crying my whole life,
and it seems to me I've
cried these brown eyes dry.



 To live is to love, and to love is to live... the meaning of life.

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boardman
Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 44

1 posted 2000-05-12 12:10 PM


Hi Trynete,

I can sure relate to this one!
My life would definetly be the nightmare.
And I do like the Sunsets! Only now I am watching them from the Beaches of Florida.

You take care now!
Boardman

Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-05-12 10:21 AM


Trynete, this is sure filled with emotion and desparation!  Hope you can make your way out of that hole soon.  Keep those brown eyes on the sunset and hold fast to your dreams.  
dh

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


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