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Dark Poetry #1

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Scarlet Lady
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 242
Midwest

0 posted 2000-05-10 05:41 PM

Shredded
Pain embedded
Used my heart like a toy
I feel sick, used, void
Hurts to breathe, lungs seared
Can't get my eyes cleared
Shock hit me upside the head
You left me cold in your bed
Trying now to see or feel
This can't be real??
Hopelessly in love with you
Painted with the color blue
Can't go back, can't run or hide
Can't get you back by my side
I am torn into bits and pieces
I can't wait until this anguish ceases

[This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 05-10-2000).]

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-10 08:15 PM

~Ouch,...this poem has *punch*. It's short and solid.....great conveyance of emotions. I felt it....I've felt like this...I still feel like this at times. *Hang in there.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2000-05-10 09:17 PM

Hang in there, the pain the hurt will lessen with time. I know the feeling hon *hugs*

At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen....
It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

3 posted 2000-05-10 11:25 PM

Hell kid I think I said to much last post.
My heart to you.
I'll howl tonight for you, on the west coast.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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