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SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396


0 posted 2000-05-10 05:01 PM


Victory

Your sickly backwashed leftovers
decreasing in temperature
wasting you
wasting me
in the night
when you aren't looking
stale platters of your secret
crumbling lies smeared
on a spreader
on my face
with you
on the floor
in a dream
with your shoes on
your fake smile
bloody knuckles
pounding heart
in the power of victory.


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Evilkat88
Junior Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 37

1 posted 2000-05-10 05:08 PM


I liked it very much. There is nothing better than victory.Keep writeing.
                   kat

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-05-10 08:46 PM


~It was his...but thank you so much for the reply and the encouragement.  
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-05-10 10:49 PM


Your victory is here kid, You are better than that, this I know, his ?? leftovers as you say, ((( you are better than that )))
Find yourself kid.
like I said this is your victory, chin up.
Breath your own air.
love ya kid.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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