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Dark Poetry #1

Victory

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

0 posted 2000-05-10 05:01 PM

Victory

Your sickly backwashed leftovers
decreasing in temperature
wasting you
wasting me
in the night
when you aren't looking
stale platters of your secret
crumbling lies smeared
on a spreader
on my face
with you
on the floor
in a dream
with your shoes on
your fake smile
bloody knuckles
pounding heart
in the power of victory.

Evilkat88
Junior Member

since 2000-05-01

Posts 37

1 posted 2000-05-10 05:08 PM

I liked it very much. There is nothing better than victory.Keep writeing.
kat

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-05-10 08:46 PM

~It was his...but thank you so much for the reply and the encouragement.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

3 posted 2000-05-10 10:49 PM

Your victory is here kid, You are better than that, this I know, his ?? leftovers as you say, ((( you are better than that )))
Find yourself kid.
like I said this is your victory, chin up.
Breath your own air.
love ya kid.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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