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BlueEyez666 New Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 9 |
Holding On... i've been tossed... i've been thrown... i've been smashed... and i've been burned... my heart can only endure... so very little more... and i'm holding on to what i can... because i don't think i can let go... my hands are small... my grip is getting weak... but i'm holding on for what its worth... so don't make me let go... not until i'm ready... give me time... let me find my own identity... i'll tell you when i'm set... but when i'm ready to move on... don't cry or ask me to stay... just watch me go... just let me pass away... |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
Yes Blue......I can relate to your holding on! I too have hung on way too long.....and pleaded for the one who has hurt me, to not let go, even though they were the source of pain. Loved it! Thanks! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes, "Let me pass away" it would be so easy. but our hearts are stronger than we think, We have a reason to breath, if you can't find yours just E me. and I'll tell you. Find yourself kid, you are so much worth it to the world, your writings have shown this. Love your expressions here kid. Joel.< !signature--> I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. [This message has been edited by Joel the wolf (edited 05-10-2000).] |
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Evilkat88 Junior Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 37 |
I to have felt the same. But it took me awhile to figure that it was not all bad but with the bad comes the good and then the bad agin. My friend who is in Linden Oaks (a mental instatution) said so many people say that "I wouldn't care if evertone was sad Ijust want to dissapear for awile." She has gotten the help she needs and is doing better. But I'm not saying you need help or anything sometimes we just need to talk or even cry. I hopefully you won't leave us. Just keep writeing that's what I do. God Bless kat |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
BlueEyez, hope yo find that identity. Enjoyed reading this verse! dh A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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