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Dark Poetry #1

Spoken

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

0 posted 1999-10-10 12:56 PM

Spoken

you...

dare revile

me?

I mock your
treacherous words,
from the
bloodied bowels
of my
hate-darkened
soul.

and I cast
damning aspersions
upon the weakness
of your naked heart.

bitter deceit
can be played
by more than you.

so I take up
the chalice
of this challenge

and dare you...

to speak again.

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

1 posted 1999-10-10 12:59 PM

Ooo....chilling! Loved it! And I do dare speak!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 1999-10-10 06:05 AM

yes very chilling, also very good loved it Christopher

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-10-10 10:40 AM

You did good my friend.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 1999-10-10 02:52 PM

Uh...Silence is golden. I think I'll just give this my uttermost voiceless admiration.
Good work, Chris, but you scare me sometimes.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

5 posted 1999-10-12 08:45 AM

Hey Chris...good work...scared me good!!

Jenny

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