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Dark Poetry #1

I dont have a title for this poem.

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-10-09 01:45 AM

At first you asked me if I want to be yours,
I answered “I don’t mind.
Now I can see that I was obviously blind.
You wounded my heart,
And tore it apart.
All your words were lies.
I knew there was something not right,
When I looked into your eyes.

You then asked me to come back.
I said, “How can I,
When all you did was lie?”
But then something told me to say yes to you,
And that I did do.

When I said yes, you just pushed me away,
Told me to leave and not to stay.
You said that you don’t love me
And never did,
You told me to let you be.

Now you come to me,
Asking to take you back again.
My answer is no,
Because how will I know,
That you won’t cause me that pain?

The answer is no.
It’s time to let me go.

It’s true what people say,
“You want that which you can’t have.”
So let it be this way!!!

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

1 posted 1999-10-09 02:57 AM

Nicely done!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-10-09 02:43 PM

I like how there is so much feeling....well
done.

[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 10-09-1999).]

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

3 posted 1999-10-09 08:16 PM

Thank you

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

4 posted 1999-10-09 09:03 PM

I know the feeling of loving that which you cant have.

Great poem though

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life is short kill quick

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

5 posted 1999-10-10 06:40 PM

True wut ppl say, u always want that which u can't have, and thats how it always is gona be. So i guess than he cant ave me!

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