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I shall wait until the End.............
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I shall wait until the End............. |
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Zunera Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 30Pakistan |
I shall wait for you till you see what I can give to prove my love to prove the trust to prove that I can and I shall wait for you here inside my heart her inside my soul here here with your thoughts and me I shall fight until the end till the very end when day meets night and crimson goes the sky and frosted is the soul and frozen the entire core Yes! till that very end when I shall die but Love be alive |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Bravo, this is very nice. I've found myself in this situation before. It wound up being more painfull than it was worth though because the people that I saved my love for didn't save any for me. The only reason I'm saying that is so that you know that the person you'll wait for might not wait for you. I wish you the very best of luck though. Good piece, thanks again.  G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I'm in this place now, I did a poem about ?? last week called "Crystal Tears", and I have found the wait to be worth it so far. I wish you the best of luck. this is a great expression. thank you. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Zunera Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 30Pakistan |
Thanx 'G' and 'Joel', it is really encouraging having such passianate people like you around me. Thank You very much for the lovely replies. I really wish my Love waits for me as well. Take Care Zunera |
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Evilkat88 Junior Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 37 |
G is right. I can only wish you is luck. But don't close you're self off to other people, cuase by the time the one you love wises up you might have found someone else. Good Luck Kat |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This was a very good read but I have to agree with some others here that sometimes we may wait in hope but thats all it sometimes just hope and while we are waiting for something that may or may not happen true loves has passed us bye without us knowing it. I hope this isn't the case for you  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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