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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
If I could encapsulate my heart to withstand my all time fears. Like the ancient pine trees, that cry it’s amber tears. In self defense of it’s pine. it traps the very same thing. That’s eating at it’s bark for all time. As my heart eats at me, being without you. Amber tears capture this love of true. If only you were the geologist that cracked my DNA, thousands of year after. What would you find? What would it say? That my heart is yours, That my soul has stayed true without fear. That within my spirit is my heart captured forever in amber tears. With your name, carved within Holding my words forever and true. with a small slogan burnt beneath it just for you. "I have known paradise, within white dove’s eyes, patiently waiting for her love to relies." (To My White Dove) Joel the wolf. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
You have just a way with words, it amazes me. Your way of writing is yet very inspirational to me. Thank you for all ur lovely, yet sometimes "dark" poems. Peace I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Beautiful Joel~ Hasn't she landed yet??? I have prayed. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Boy Joel....this is truly an incredible poem,...now don't go writing back to me saying how incredible doesn't apply,...because it does. The whole idea of your heart encased in amber tears....my goodness,...really...I loved this. How you pull this off so well,...and the beautiful text you use...awww,..I think I like this one best buddy....really. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wonderful imagery Joel, I was surprised your heart wasn't found thousands of years later, sheltered in hardened Amber, and someone stole your DNA!!!  Wonderful work I hope she returns to you one day.. Stay in touch you!!  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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