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Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp

0 posted 2000-05-05 09:12 AM


If I could encapsulate my heart
to withstand my all time fears.
Like the ancient pine trees,
that cry it’s amber tears.

In self defense of it’s pine.
it traps the very same thing.
That’s eating at it’s bark
for all time.

As my heart eats at me,
being without you.
Amber tears capture
this love of true.

If only you were the geologist
that cracked my DNA,
thousands of year after.
What would you find?
What would it say?

That my heart is yours,
That my soul has stayed true
without fear.
That within my spirit is
my heart captured forever
in amber tears.

With your name, carved within
Holding my words forever and true.
with a small slogan
burnt beneath it just for you.

"I have known paradise,
within white dove’s eyes,
patiently waiting
for her love to relies."

(To My White Dove)
Joel the wolf.


 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

© Copyright 2000 Joel. - All Rights Reserved
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-05-05 11:41 AM


You have just a way with words, it amazes me.  Your way of writing is yet very inspirational to me.  Thank you for all ur lovely, yet sometimes "dark" poems.

Peace


 I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!



tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-05-06 05:29 AM


Beautiful Joel~
Hasn't she landed yet??? I have prayed.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-05-06 12:06 PM


~Boy Joel....this is truly an incredible poem,...now don't go writing back to me saying how incredible doesn't apply,...because it does.  The whole idea of your heart encased in amber tears....my goodness,...really...I loved this.  How you pull this off so well,...and the beautiful text you use...awww,..I think I like this one best buddy....really.
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-05-06 11:35 PM


Wonderful imagery Joel, I was surprised your heart wasn't found thousands of years later, sheltered in hardened Amber, and someone stole your DNA!!!  
Wonderful work I hope she returns to you one day..
Stay in touch you!!  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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