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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
When does the curtain fall When does half become all When do you see me as i am When is it truth and not a sham as a way to calm my scream slap me and wake me from my dream the square becomes the whole of love from a lizard to a dove i`m not over it at all into the void i took the fall no turning back from the blue into the black this world`s a wonder babies crying sounds like thunder then there`s your voice it splits the atom slams the brakes pulls me up from the fathoms into sunlight and blows away the novicane of day to day so give it to me i need it give it to me now don`t ask why don`t ask how cause deep down you know without a thought never learned,were never taught it just flows from you like a river and sweeps me away and sucks me under only to be flung upon the bank gasping breathless near to death making love or making life whats the difference if it ends the strife of mindless **** |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Whoa!! Now this poem just reaches out and grabs ya by the throat. But I do understand where you are coming from with it. Keep your chin up. Peace |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
This is beautiful Nameless!! I love the descriptions....unfortunately the feeling and not the words of the emotion are unpleaseant....but maybe writing this has helped calm a little =] i hope so....exquisite poem =] swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
it's these questions we all would like to ask, and with answers back. loved the poem. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This is a great piece. Isn't it crazy how something that can make you feel so good can make you feel so bad?.....I loved the line "pulls me up from fathoms, into sunlight and blows away the novicane of day to day"...I've been doing this too,..being pacified...numbed.....but for me I think it's nothing more. ***Great poem*** |
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