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Dark Poetry #1

I Trip On Me

Evilkat88
Junior Member

since 2000-05-01

Posts 37

0 posted 2000-05-04 07:21 PM

I trip on me,
I stumble I'm free.
Flying high above the ground,
No one is around.
Souring through the air,
I look down I get a scar.
Through the night,
I get A little fright.
Softly I land,
Somewhere in the sand.
Walking to somewhere,
Finding nowhere.
I wake up in the morning light,
Pain is still in sight.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-04 07:24 PM

~Sadly it takes many a morning to work through the pain...but if you keep your head up and mind focused....it will come. Great post.

Evilkat88
Junior Member

since 2000-05-01

Posts 37

2 posted 2000-05-04 08:28 PM

Very true when I wrote this I was listening to one of my favorite bands Kiddney Theives you probly haven't heard of them but it inspiered me

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

3 posted 2000-05-05 01:51 AM

Flying can be so wonderful, if in a day dream, or a night dream, it can take you away from the pain on earth, But time (many mornings) can only ease the true pain.
A great poem, super imaging.
Joel.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

4 posted 2000-05-05 07:33 AM

Great little poem, I liked it very much

Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Evilkat88
Junior Member

since 2000-05-01

Posts 37

5 posted 2000-05-06 05:05 PM

Thank you very much for your reaply's.It's so wonderful being in the dream world but it sucks when you wake up. Thanks all
Kat

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