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pleasA Love Lost

Evilkat88
Junior Member

since 2000-05-01

Posts 37

0 posted 2000-05-02 11:37 PM

You are right in front of me but as far away as can be
Stas, sun, and moon are closer than a love that is gone
You are a love that I have lost
I care for you can't you see
But do you even care for me?
A stare, a glance
I won't let myself see
No matter how much I want us to be
It seems you'll never have love for me
Now I know not to care for about anyone
You've hurt me, I'm broken, I'm I'm done
You are a love that i have lost
kat00

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-05-03 01:49 AM

This is one of the hardest things I can think of that is to love someone and not get that love back, it's like being discarded on the side of the road.
This poem is very heartfelt.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2000-05-03 05:02 AM

Kat~
So sad, to have a heart so full of love and not recieve the same back is heart breaking.
Sorry for that
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

ashen
Junior Member

since 2000-04-25

Posts 13

3 posted 2000-05-03 08:05 AM

sending emotion out, and not getting it back. that really hurts. i wish you the best.
~ashen~

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

4 posted 2000-05-03 05:06 PM

This seems so familiar, I can relate to this too well.
Yours truly ~Broken~

"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before;
But the silence was unbroken, and the stillness gave no token"
~Edgar Allan Poe (1809-1849) "The Raven"

Evilkat88
Junior Member

since 2000-05-01

Posts 37

5 posted 2000-05-03 10:56 PM

Thank you all so much for reaplying the guy wasn't even worth it and I was too stupid to see that.
Blessed Be
kat

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