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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida 
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Decision's caress in final jest Screams of what I used to be No final mark - I've failed the test Display of simple virtuosity Whereby and by I heave a sigh To glance behind my back No helping now - I stand and cry a'side this worn and ruddy track Who am I to know, what goes to show Moans of where I want to be You know me not, this is my lot Discarded alone - I do not dream |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah, been there done that... don't ever give up dreaming tough, nicole. Stop glancing behind your back and see what's waiting just ahead. Much love and many smiles are yours for the taking. Love ya girl, Michael |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~nice writing~~ sometimes, a poem appears that has such expression and soul revealing that you want to read it over and over. This poem is one of those. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
No not discarded, an not alone, not here. I'm with mike and Dan, I've done that been there, and soul revealing. it is a short and to the point poem. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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