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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-04-28 08:57 PM


In a self consided world
I stand alone
I will not stand with anyone else
That means I have to open my heart
And let someone in
That means I have to be stronger
And be more ok with myself
Or just let someone help me
But if I let myself be helped
I might fall in love
I can't do that
But I need help

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)


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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-04-29 06:51 AM


Hi Neala,
this is such great writing...
and soul searching.
we cant stand alone for ever...
at some point we must trust our selves
enough to let someone else in...
this is very well expressed.
so glad to see you posting again.
take care, jm


 Is it too much to find an answer,
Is it too much to hold you close.
Is it too much to find a reason,
Is it too much to free my soul --
From self control ...
And I know you're always waiting for me ...
You take me far away,
And I know you're holding me ...
And it's better now ...
~vertical horizon~



SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-04-29 11:52 AM


~Neala...these fears you speak of ring so true here...opening your heart, accepting help, and allowing yourself to fall in love....to let someone in.....god..I know this feeling.  Great post...
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-04-29 11:57 AM


"Ah!" The opening of the heart, What joys lay ahead? what sorrow? what life.
We are not made to be alone.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
4 posted 2000-04-29 07:12 PM


Just gettin over my problems enough to love him will be so hard.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
5 posted 2000-04-29 07:20 PM


Neala~
You have such a broken heart that it has not healed enough to let anyone touch it. I hope it heals enough soon to at least let someone get a little closer, enough to at least help it to start to heal.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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