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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Night is here black as ink watching heart sinks Look for signs lights flashing across the sky train crashing images burned in my mind can't turn away can't help, can't find... floating nightmare follow where leading tomorrow heat, scorching heat mouth open wide can't find you nowhere to hide turn the key switch off doesn't stop hear you cough silence so loud floating shroud... ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Silence So Loud A floating Shroud !!! I Like it!! Jenny |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Very neat style!! Very easy for the reader to read! Good images too! ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wonderful work, Rainbow. Glad to see you getting im touch with your Darker side. Love the "hear you cough" line... ------------------ Michael Anderson When God puts a tear in your eye, He puts a rainbow in your heart. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I'm not really sure what to say, this was part of a nightmare, based on a crash where a close friend of mine died and I hoped if I got the images on paper I could clear them from my mind...for last night it worked... I wasn't sure what to say because I don't want to make anyone uncomfortable but if anyone has any ideas on how to get rid of something like this that prays on your mind, I'd be really grateful.. HUGS all ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
RG, next time on ICQ, we shall talk. I'll share some tips on just that. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
good poetry here though not to sound mean, sorry if I do some things could be changed, and Im not sure what its just a feeling that cant be explained ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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