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NamelessOne
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 197
Biloxi MS

0 posted 2000-04-28 05:27 AM

The wonder that fills me when i`m with you
does crazy things to my heart
and the wanting that i have to see you again
fills my mind
and more than just a part

you seem to me a mystery
likes the depths of a dark lake
that`s calm on the surface
but swirls with a powerful force
deep and unseen

the waters not giving up her secrets
to anyone not deserving of the knowledge
and respectful of its power
the desire overwhelms me to strip naked
and plunge into those waters
and be wrapped in their warmth

the taste of you on my lips
and the smell of you filling my senses
downward i go as the light fades behind me

the depths are like a glove
tight and welcoming
warm and safe

when i awake i`m on the shore
gasping and out of breath
wet and so intensely alive
feeling like lightning must feel
as it rushes to the ground
splitting the summer air

[This message has been edited by NamelessOne (edited 04-28-2000).]

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

1 posted 2000-04-28 05:37 AM

I really enjoyed reading this.. I'll keep my eyes open for more of your work.

MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2000-04-28 07:03 AM

This was fabulous, so refreshing

loved that dip. Seriously the imagery was fantastic and I liked this very much

Tracie~

Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

3 posted 2000-04-28 09:27 AM

Very vivid Kid, a great post.
Joel.

I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

4 posted 2000-05-02 03:27 AM

finally you have combined your first two loves, your water and your words. excellent. thank you.

kynder

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