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Night Love |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Shadow dancing Moon lapsing Clouds moving in the night Love passing through my heart Guided by faint light A hand touch breif and bare No time could he spare For his love to be Longing for his warm eyed stare Shadows move across his face No longer do I feel his touch The body warmth's turned cold Night love's become too much We both turn and walk away |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Brief encounters, sometimes they are the most beautiful  Great workA heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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kristi Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 33Yulee, FL |
Lovely poem! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joy~ This is longingly rendered. Waltz within your memories ... an encounter worth writing about is worth remembering. Beautiful, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
You both walked away, but in the turning one had to turn first, that leaves the other to ether run after, or turn also. This is the tragedy in love, to be turned on. (so to speak). No pun intended. Great writing, great poem, great feelings. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Thank you Isis, Kristi, Marge, and Joel.  Joy |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Joy~ brought back memories I've had a couple of encounters like this and they are fond ones to look back on...Sigh "wonder what they are doing right now" Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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