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kristi
Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 33
Yulee, FL

0 posted 2000-04-26 12:45 PM


I was so surprised to see,
the letter that came back to me.

Written on the front in red,
the heartbreaking words that said...

He's no longer at this address,
just last week he was laid to rest.

I never found the words to explain,
the reasons behind my refrain.

I couldn't hurt him anymore.
That's why I walked out the door.

I thought I wanted more from life,
than to be an everyday ordinary wife.

One week to late, I've come to see,
in his arms is where I want to be.


© Copyright 2000 kristi - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-04-26 12:55 PM


Kristi is this real or made up?  If it's real my sympathies hon, how awful for this to happen to you both??????
Fate or destiny can be confusing, why are simply left to ask why???????
If you need to talk PLEASE feel free to email me.

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
2 posted 2000-04-26 01:46 AM


kristi...
I donno if this is real or just your imagination but this one made me think of when i lost someone and just wanted to be there...
well written

 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

kristi
Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 33
Yulee, FL
3 posted 2000-04-26 01:54 AM


This was inspired by something that happend to someone else.  I'm thankful that I don't know this pain first hand.  

Isis & AVANTI ~ Thank you for the kind words.

Tess
Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288
Australia
4 posted 2000-04-26 11:41 AM


hmmmm..makes you think tho doesnt it...say your I love you's today..tomorrow may be too late


 "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~



Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
5 posted 2000-04-27 12:39 PM


Kiss them when they walk out the door they may be gone a long, long, time.
And yes it hurts I have lost this way.
It seems at times it's not healthy to be my friend.
Kristi I hope this is just good writing.
if not my heart goes out to you.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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