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Tess
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since 2000-03-22
Posts 288
Australia

0 posted 2000-04-24 01:37 PM



I never thought I could hate you
Never dreamt I could watch
with impassionate eyes
the blood slowly seep
from your soul
and as the last drop
trickles
onto the ground
I turn
And walk
away



 "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~



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Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-24 03:41 PM


Tess, to gain this impassionate eyes what do I have to do?
I have not reached this level yet, to watch the blood drop the last.
She is still in my heart.
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This is a very powerful statement, one that takes strength, and courage.  To watch the blood of a friend (lover) drain from your heart.
A good expression in the statement.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-04-24 09:25 PM


~Such strength in your words,...I like this.
Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest
3 posted 2000-04-24 11:04 PM


Ooooooooooooooooooooo...... have I ever felt like this before!!  Thank you for the guts to share the way you really have felt. Isn't it the truth that sets us free?????  Well, I am still waiting....hope your freedom comes soon too. Thanks for a step in the right direction!
kristi
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since 2000-04-24
Posts 33
Yulee, FL
4 posted 2000-04-24 11:18 PM


Illusion said it all.  I really enjoyed this!
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
5 posted 2000-04-25 02:16 AM


Tess~
Great piece, very passionately stated.
Way powerful  
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

6 posted 2000-04-25 06:56 PM


Ouch...the person this is aimed at must have done something really bad.  I don't think I am strong enough to ever reach that level, a downfall of mine..to trusting.



Tess
Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288
Australia
7 posted 2000-04-26 11:20 AM


Joel the wolf - It's taken a long time for me to get to that stage, and with some people you never do. There are some who I think always stay in your heart. This person forced the issue to this point of no return.

Spitfire Thanks  

Illusion - yes sometimes it just seems so harsh when you say stuff like this, and I must admit it's not often I feel this way !

Kristi and tracie Thanks  for your comments

Dhuron  yep well l was always very trusting too. I don't think you have to get to this point. It was just  that at that time, that was the way I felt  

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