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kari
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since 1999-10-03
Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA

0 posted 2000-04-23 04:10 PM


You will skim the pages
Your heart will drop like tears
You will feel the absence
Cry over the loss that had to be lost
The tears will trickle
Habitual tears
Everyday you'll fight the day
Smile the fake smile you've grown into
Share your thoughts only you understand
Looks like you hit your funny bone again
Bipolar
Beheaded
Behaved
Excruciating pain to the mind
Silence to Solace
Solace to Words
Words to Think
Thinking to Cry
Crying because you know no other way
Continue to wish
Continue to miss
Missing those who can't exist
Teaching your soul how to swallow life
And not to die in the process
It's possible
You could die one day
Just cause he said so
Master in command
Band-aids for your hurts
Blankets for your frozen heart
Shadows to console the burning eyes

© Copyright 2000 kari - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-04-23 04:17 PM


~Hooray,...I love the way this one was written, great job...had a great flow to it...I loved the sense I got of you just letting it all out.
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-23 07:45 PM


Spit is right, this has a great flow, very strong.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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