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~A Bus Ride~

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

0 posted 2000-04-20 08:52 PM

~A Bus Ride~

A bus ride for the groceries
in the heat of the summer sun
counting change
counting tears
evil stares
a bus ride for your temporaries
those thoughts that linger
windows fogged
blurry streets
steaming bodies in plastic seats
a weeks worth of food
of life
paper or plastic?
two blocks from safety
from society's hatred...
a bus ride for the groceries.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-04-21 02:22 AM

Sounds bleek, I've been to this place.
not wanting to be around people.
Joel. an interesting way of putting it.

I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

2 posted 2003-06-10 07:34 AM

every day since i was 10 yrs old. and then i had a son at 16 and continued on the bus, but for some strange reason
i live in hawaii now
heavy

life '

kindy*amelia

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

GlisteningRain
Member

since 2004-05-06

Posts 103
The clouds

3 posted 2004-05-06 10:45 PM

It made me feel the normalness of life.
When things are just too much of the same thing. A weeks worth of groceries until you have to go again. You captured the repetitiveness life sometimes has to offer. I enjoyed it. It was awkwardly rewarding to know someone else feels how I do sometimes.

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

4 posted 2008-04-21 05:09 AM

i remember these days. i'm glad there over.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

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