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eegood
Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41
Chicago,IL

0 posted 2000-04-18 11:28 AM


you sit back and watch me cry
knowing the pain i am in
i'm unable to show emotion
until the endless tears begin.

an emptiness, so deep inside,
empowers my hopes and dreams.
everything i thought i knew
is nothing... as it seems.


a piece of me is dying
and lying on the floor.
the dreams i had are over
and can only be no more.

if saddness shone like beauty,
i'd be brighter than the sun,
gazed upon my wondering eyes
and loved by everyone.

© Copyright 2000 eegood - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-18 11:50 AM


Verrrry Grrrroood Mrrry Frrrrreind.
This is a master piece of emotions.
And tied pools of thought.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Dark Usagi
Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 18
Oviedo, FL, USA
2 posted 2000-04-18 12:57 PM


If indeed sadness did shine like beauty I would also shine...there is a reason it doesn't...Beauty lasts longer than sadness...remember that when you cry...things WILL get better if you try.

 "Pictures are so perfect...in a perfect moment until you look into their eyes and truley see the storms of their soul"-Dark Usagi

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