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Shandelier
Junior Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 22
Canada

0 posted 2000-04-18 11:26 AM




                I


I'm lost before I know where I'm going,
Tired before I take my first step.
Blinded by the arrows of sunlight
I fell, I sat, I wept.

Time is of no meaning here,
The distance travelled; none.
Betrayed by the daggers of wisdom
I moved, I lost, I won.

My voice is lost as I try to speak,
Numbness fills my heart.
Bitten by the spears of sorrow
I fade, I leave, I part.

I dream of waking up
With flowers by my side.
Rescued by the hands of fate
I loved, I lost, I tried.

Silence fills the halls of life
Of anger and of hate.
Cursed by the wings of love
I think, I hope, I wait.

  ~Shandelier~


© Copyright 2000 Shandelier - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-18 11:42 AM


It is a confusing world.
and it's said  well here.
Good Work.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
2 posted 2000-04-18 11:50 AM


this is absolute perfection.   what a flow you have here.  i really love this!!!!!!!
great great job getting in touch w/ all those truths we hate to admit.

*****kynder

 
quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.



Dark Usagi
Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 18
Oviedo, FL, USA
3 posted 2000-04-18 12:14 PM


Bravo...such great discription of the feelings...

 "Pictures are so perfect...in a perfect moment until you look into their eyes and truley see the storms of their soul"-Dark Usagi

Awesome Guy
New Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 9
Qualicum Beach , BC, Canada
4 posted 2000-04-19 02:15 PM


Well, you've got ME crying!

What a terrific poem!!


 

mcclain
Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 13

5 posted 2000-04-20 01:13 AM


wow!
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