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Shandelier Junior Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 22Canada |
I I'm lost before I know where I'm going, Tired before I take my first step. Blinded by the arrows of sunlight I fell, I sat, I wept. Time is of no meaning here, The distance travelled; none. Betrayed by the daggers of wisdom I moved, I lost, I won. My voice is lost as I try to speak, Numbness fills my heart. Bitten by the spears of sorrow I fade, I leave, I part. I dream of waking up With flowers by my side. Rescued by the hands of fate I loved, I lost, I tried. Silence fills the halls of life Of anger and of hate. Cursed by the wings of love I think, I hope, I wait. ~Shandelier~ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
It is a confusing world. and it's said well here. Good Work. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
this is absolute perfection. what a flow you have here. i really love this!!!!!!! great great job getting in touch w/ all those truths we hate to admit. *****kynder quote: |
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Dark Usagi Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 18Oviedo, FL, USA |
Bravo...such great discription of the feelings... "Pictures are so perfect...in a perfect moment until you look into their eyes and truley see the storms of their soul"-Dark Usagi |
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Awesome Guy New Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 9Qualicum Beach , BC, Canada |
Well, you've got ME crying! What a terrific poem!! |
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mcclain Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 13 |
wow! |
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