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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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girl you got some gold by the way, can i get a benjamin i saw a new soul down on the corner round up the street lookin like dey tryin to get chose but on the real how bout you and me i can show ya bettah than i can tell ya baby, game's sold not told so honeysweets come with me i'll teach you everything i need to learn but damn girl you fine when you look mad are those marks on your face quiet type wit da mean look so you already knocked the hard school time to graduate i can make you a star the way those hips is undulatin .....and off she went. Never looked back. Diploma in hand, World in her pocket. Or is it a mattress on her back? Don't bother to show her the err of her ways. All she hears is "I'm gonna get paid." *****kynder quote: |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
We do what we do. It's only us looking back in the mirror. Different. good. I like it. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Shandelier Junior Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 22Canada |
Interesting. Very interesting. I like it too. Shandelier |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
So then does she deserve our pitty? Very good kynder! I guess we're all stars in a sense! helena |
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kittyj Junior Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 32CANADA |
You got the whole vibe in this. It's got a rhythm, and i really like it. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i really went on a limb with this one. wrote it for a friend of mine who was, maybe still is, lost like this. she was on my mind.... thank you for liking it anyway!!!! *****kynder quote: |
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