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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
The deep dark shadows of your mind, teasing me. Taunting me. Confusing my emotions. Wondering what you're thinking, whether or not you believe the words coming out of your mouth. Wanting to trust you. Wanting you to heal my broken heart. But further my heart crumbles. Further it tears. Bleeding with the innocence of my existence. Torn apart by tainted trust... "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
Trusting is one of the hardest things to do in life,especially when we have been hurt over and over. sometimes we want so desprately to believe in someone, that we ignore the bad emotions they make us feel, but that doesnt mean we should never stop trying to trust. WELL DONE  take care Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Very Good Poem sKiTtLes, I agree completely with Broken on this one. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
trust is definately the shackles of love. You either break free and suffer, whatever consequence or remain bound and sheltered. Kept from tuely ever experiencing the emotion. Maybe I don't know what I'm talking about. It's a delicate suject. Great piece! helena |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Ahh... Trust, What the hell is that??? In the early centuries they had a healing procedure called bleeding, are you familiar with this? Look it up, anyway they had trust and this comes to mind. haha,,, but what do you expect from a carnivore. Oh and yes you expressed your self beautifully here. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Thank you all. Trust *is* a very delicate thing, which is why when someone attains anothers trust, they should cherish it...which is what makes me wonder why some guys can take for granted something so special... thanks again. sKiTtLeS~ "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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