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kittyj
Junior Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 32
CANADA

0 posted 2000-04-17 05:07 PM


If I could save the wasted days
Separate the light from the shadows

Time used to crawl across the ceiling
With only interruptions from passing headlights
Holes in my skin aching
Screaming to be heard
Begging to be satisfied
Never ending

Such a waste
Never asking why
Never questioning
Everything terrible
Thriving on the complication
A traitor to my own soul
A fraud

Even though time has passed
It kills me to go back there
But there must be a lesson
Hidden in the trash
Somewhere


© Copyright 2000 kittyj - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-17 05:10 PM


Kitty: if you walk backwards you can stumble again.
this is good work.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

2 posted 2000-04-17 05:24 PM


A very Good Poem, it often is in the last place we care to look.
Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
3 posted 2000-04-17 07:20 PM


I believe that there is something to learn from everything we go thru and if we fail to lear the lesson, we will never be able to move on. WELL DONE  


take care
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada
4 posted 2000-04-17 08:32 PM


Oh sweetie. I'm sorry I wasn't there. We're a couple of strong ladies and at least we have eachother now! My love and support. It's fabulous. You made me cry!

j.

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
5 posted 2000-04-18 12:31 PM


oh hon.  what your words do to me.  i'll dive in that dumpster for you and we will be dirty  together.  keep it comin....  it somehow burns the trash away!!!!


*****kynder

 
quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.



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