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Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-10-04 11:06 PM

You let me
You let me do it all
You allowed it
You deserved it anyway
You wanted to lick my wounds
And hide my scars
So don't act victimized
You did it all
The self-destruction
I didn't make you
It's not my fault
If anything it's yours
Do you know how it feels to be accused?
No!
How could you do this to me?
YOU should be begging for MY forgiveness
I don't care if you're sorry
How can I trust you now?
I don't know
Maybe I'll forgive you
But only if you..........

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 1999-10-04 11:12 PM

What can I say, Sys, some people need to be victimized...glad you're willing to accomidate the needy. Great piece, love the lingering ending.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-10-04 11:20 PM

Sys,
You never cease to amaze me. I really enjoyed this entire work.

Jenny

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

3 posted 1999-10-04 11:26 PM

Thanks for the replies. Micheal...this poem is not from my point of view, it is from another persons point of view.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

4 posted 1999-10-05 09:21 AM

For every victim there is an attacker.Well done!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

5 posted 1999-10-05 03:27 PM

Sys,
I can always count on you for a reply to my work....Thanks for trying to look at all my words with an open mind!!
Blessed Be!

Jenny Lee

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

6 posted 1999-11-05 02:29 PM

Amy, I used to be a jacka** just like this person. I'm so happy to be free of that mindset.
This is really nice work. I'm diggin' it.

DB

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The moon was bright overhead when I reembarked in the pinnace to return to my ship. A chill night breeze came whispering down from the depths of the valley, and suddenly the place was full of ghosts,-shadows of men alive and dead,- my own among them.
========Mutiny on the Bounty====
========Nordhoff and Hall====

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