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kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 2000-04-17 12:37 PM



I just don't get it.
I remain the same.
Thought others also shared my train.
But flip the script is the
Reality that rains on my
Parade of No More Games.

It was going so good.
I was happy with the world,
And the treatment it was giving.
Then one, maybe two, even five days will pass,
And there goes my joy in living.

Sometimes I wish I had the ability
To be completely alone,
Needing only me.
But I know that's an impossibility.
So, I get to swallow the bitter fact that
I feel like a 7-up.
Love never has, never will have my back.
Maybe it's not so bad.
Much like caffeine,
I'm better off without.


*****kynder

 
quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.



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NamelessOne
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS
1 posted 2000-04-17 01:01 AM


I`ve gotta say that feeling like this is something that i can more than relate to...i`d say probably closer to a lifestyle
but it`s gotten better and i was kidding myself too about being better off without it.

Your words do magic young poetess you spin your spell so well, i`m tied up by them.

Many thanks for your opening of the heart

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-17 02:34 AM


You are too a passionate person to turn your back on this large part of life.
Love your work Kid. hahaha
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Shandelier
Junior Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 22
Canada
3 posted 2000-04-18 01:52 PM


It's not that you'er better off without , but that It comes to you when you stop lookin for it.

Shandelier

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-04-18 11:25 PM


You are too kinda   to turn from the hope of love, without some love we wither and die a slow painful death.  Stay strong, it's waiting just ahead.
I do know how you feel and what you mean though..

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada
5 posted 2000-04-18 11:31 PM


Even if you tried, it would suck ya right back in. Powerful thing love. It can be pursuasive with hearts such as ours.
Still loving your work!

Helena

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