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OBLIVION
Junior Member
since 1999-10-04
Posts 21


0 posted 1999-10-04 06:52 PM


Weary sentimental notions,
Rampage a deserted road,
In an untamed,
Yet unexperienced
Maze of a mind.
Who
Threw
The innocence?
Who stole the breath,
Of a thousand happy lifetimes,
In one night of reverie,
And uncouthe enlightenment.
You
****ed me,
And for that,
I'll always be grateful.
You bought me a lesson for free.
Deceit never turns its back,
On the ones it loves.


© Copyright 1999 OBLIVION - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 1999-10-04 10:12 PM


Very well done, Oblivion, hail and welcome to the Dark Forum. Hope to see more from you here soon.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.



JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-10-04 10:18 PM


Welcome to the darkness!!!!

Jenny

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