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Dark Poetry #1

~broken~ an oldie

IsabelleSkye
Member

since 1999-06-27

Posts 253

0 posted 1999-08-18 01:13 AM

over and over
I have given in
broken myself to your will
prostrated
humbled
heart rending
tears uncried
anger burning
love that died
identity lost
lips forming your words
til I become you
faceless
nameless
my soul a fragile shell
crushed
defiled
you took our love
abused
ignored
lying in pieces
blue winds scattering the remnants
flying
free
til you are the one left broken

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

1 posted 1999-08-20 01:36 AM

Aaahh, this sure hits home. I think we can all relate to this emotional wounding....yet a freedom. Really nice piece, I like the short lines, very reader friendly style! (Maybe I'm just lazy cause it's late!)

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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