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kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 2000-04-15 11:24 PM



To love from afar
Is no fair game.
Unrequited,
Unreleased.
Light as a feather,
But never does it wane,
Never does it cease.
Truest as the bluest of seas,
Simply won't accept deceipt.

I can meander and mingle
In the vernal valleys
Of my piquant pretend;
Daintily dancing
In the shadows
Repugnant reality
Sensuously suspends.

So beautiful, my unmarred love.
So precious, my naive'te.
But no medal,trophy or ribbon
Shall I gain.

I, the victor/em, receive only
Perfect pain
For my gallant efforts
In vacuous vain.


*****kynder

 
quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.



© Copyright 2000 Kynder - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-04-15 11:57 PM


Tis hard, I agree Kynder. Great work *hugs*

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-16 02:23 AM


I agree, great work.
Joel. and yes it is hard.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

NamelessOne
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS
3 posted 2000-04-16 04:21 AM


I`m inspired by your words and their structure and their fluid grace,the way they express emotion greater than just themselves,how you convey your message clearly and fresh.Im hooked
Fantastic work

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
4 posted 2000-04-17 06:30 AM


So hard to be on the outside looking in. HUGs
Lovley poem, you have much talent.
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


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