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Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

0 posted 1999-10-04 02:33 AM

Twilight

Claws of night,
grip the sun.
kills the light,
doth this one.
Veiled black,
covers all.
Pristine reek,
demons thrall.
Quagmire deep,
sucks the soul.
Eternal fires,
Satan's roll.
Hell spawn's might,
morning dew.
Cycle stops,
starts anew.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 1999-10-04 02:45 AM

Christopher,WOW!! This is brilliant! loved it.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 1999-10-04 03:16 AM

Chris,
Good to see you in the Darkroom again,
love this "little ditty" of yours. "Pristine reek", yeah, I recognize that one, alright...well done my friend.

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Michael Anderson

The coldest lies are often told in silence.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-10-04 03:23 AM

LOL

Sorry, but a bitter humor touches me most.
Well-Darkened slice of your soul this is.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

4 posted 1999-10-04 03:57 AM

Great Poem....I liked how you showed how everything is in one big cycle.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

5 posted 1999-10-04 11:43 AM

Christopher,
Bravo!!
You have a really good style to all your work...
Hope to see more of you here in the Dark !!

Jenny

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

6 posted 1999-10-04 06:39 PM

What a perspective!
You tickle me bones you do, dear...!!!

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

7 posted 1999-10-04 10:55 PM

Michael, I know it as well, it is the foul stench of the demons that haunt me ever.
Glad I was able to pull a chuckle out of you DE, I wonder if that's a first!
Thank you Dark Angel, I'm blushing at brilliant, when in fact it is dark!

SD- thank you, C'est La Vie; Such is life
Jenny, we'll see, I've been having this problem with a bug bite lately... makes it hard to see my demons sometimes!
K- I'll gladly tickle you elsewhere as well!

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

8 posted 1999-10-05 09:08 AM

Loved this Christopher! Love how you brought everything around to the beginning.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

9 posted 1999-10-07 11:20 PM

Hmmm, well. Considering I can't return the favoUr apparently, I don't think I'll let you!!!!

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