Dark Poetry #1 |
Me (an acrostic) |
Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Sporadic happiness Yesterday's kind Self-induced misery Tortured Excell at failure My own worst enemy Aspirations gone Trusting of no one Infinite hate Corrosion of morals Deaf to all hope Emotional destruction Collapse of sanity Avoiding the truth Youth of America ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Indeed, Sys. Very well done. ------------------ Michael Anderson The coldest lies are often told in silence. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Well done indeed, my friend. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Sys I really like this one. It is a really good form. I am not very good at this type of writing!! Jenny |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Thanks for the replies....I wasn't too sure about this one..... ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Man your good at this. I still say your way better than me! good luck on your next posts. ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Nicely done....although so sad.No one excels at failure,it just seems that way. ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Did you catch the acrostic in Tragic Twilight? I thought for sure you would... Jenny |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Dragoness what do you mean no one excels at failure obviously youve never met me! ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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